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Storyboards

 This is the first of our storyboards which is the first 20 seconds of our film, the drawings in this are very crude but we were not going for detail in the pictures, they are only to give the idea of whats going on, they are not worked down to exactly what the shots are going to be like but our film will look very similar to this.



Character Profiles

Age 24

Bio: Jacob is a hardworking individual who will always succeed in what he is doing and get what he wants. Jacob hasn’t realised yet in his adult life that crime does not pay, and will find out soon enough. Jacob is a top get away driver who has serviced the top criminals and has been very successful in his line of criminal work but this will all change after the next job.

Appearance: Jacob is always looking smart and professional wearing a suit and always well shaven.


Personality: Cool, calm and collected, but serious when it comes to business.

Age 32

Bio: The “Don” is a business man. He likes little involvement with his illegal activities; he prefers to play the “supervisor” role as it keeps his hands clean. He is a well organised man who always looks the part by wearing smart and expensive shirts and suits.

The Don is a newly married man however he refuses to wear a wedding ring as he doesn’t want the criminals that he works with to know that he is a married man as this is his weakness and being married has caused him to change his perspective of life hence the “one last job” that will be featured in the film.

Appearance: Clean shaven and serious looking male, always sharp dressed with expensive designer shirts and suits.

Personality: nobody that works with him knows Dons true character. He is a mysterious but serious character that likes to get jobs done quickly and move onto the next one.




Age 21

Bio: Chris is the youngest of all the members, he's the baby of the group but despite this is has a big mouth and he isn't afraid to say what is on his mind and he also isn't afraid to pull the trigger. Chris became who he is today through his uncle, Ben Clayton who was a famous
gunman from the 80's. Chris adored his uncle and whilst on a trip away when he was 12 witnessed his1 first murder and because anxious to start
his own body count and follow in his uncles footsteps.

Appearance: Although Chris has money and a large selection of expensive and designer suits, he is very unorganised and often is late to appointments because of this he is often wearing odd suit jackets with trousers and non matching shoes.

Personality: Chris talks a lot when he is tense and nervous, this often leads to people getting annoyed with him as other members from the crew like to be in quiet and think about what's going to happen next. He is a
kind person but also a gun wielding killer.

Age 25

Bio: Matthew is the safe cracker, without him there is no point in the

whole operation, even though all of the members of the crew play a large part each, all of the members rely on Matthew to be able to open the safe quickly so they can make a get away before the police arrive. He fools people into thinking that he isn't smart though his slow speech and slurred words although this was only caused by his armature boxing career in his teens when he because the 4th best teenager in the country. Matthew gave up the boxing and turned to a life of crime when he broke his arm in a motorbike accident and realised that he could use his fighting skills to earn respect so he joined a gang.

Appearance: Mathew is similar to the other characters, he wears smart sophisticated clothes everywhere he goes to make sure people know he means business.

Personality: Matthew is down to earth and realises the effect that his actions have on people however he refuses to give up the life of crime as he knows there is no other way to make the amount of money that he does legitimately. 

Movie script

Setting: Large room that is well lit with a desk, with a laptop on it.

DON is in his hideout alone on his mobile phone, he is calling up people that he knows through previous “jobs” to try and sort out a meet point to organise a bank robbery.

DON

(Low angle shot from the floor. See the DON walk past the camera and into a room and sit down where there will be a match on action)

Don picks up a pile of paper which is CV type document with bank robber’s skills, abilities and pictures on with a phone number at the bottom.

He picks up the phone and dials a telephone number. After this you hear the sound of a phone ringing.

Each time they talk it cuts to a different person Talking.

JACOB GREEN

“Hello”

DON

(Pause…) I have a job for you

CHRIS JENNINGS

“Where do I need to go?”

DON

“Go to

29 Union Street, West Plymouth

at 19 hundred hours tomorrow.”

MATHEW BENTON

“Who do I ask for?”

DON

“Ask for Ronnie Vendetta” (Pause… Phone boop)

Cuts to sped up shot of the sun coming up to symbolise over night.

JACOB is making his way to the rendezvous to meet RONNIE VENDETTA (Driving)

Cuts to a shot of JACOB driving to Meet RONNIE, whilst JACOB is inside with RONNIE, the film shows CHRIS & MATHEW having a conversation outside.

CHRIS

Check out my new piece man.

MATHEW

That must have cost you a ton?

CHRIS

You should know by now man, i don’t pay for my guns.

MATHEW

If someone took my gun when I died I would be pissed.

CHRIS

I aim to please.

After JACOB has been inside meeting Ronnie, he walks out with and envelope. CHRIS & MATHEW are still waiting outside and talking

JACOB GREEN

Stop chit chattin’ ladies, let’s go.

Shot shows JACOB, CHRIS & MATHEW getting in the car and then speeding away.

 

This is our script that we are using for the film, it is not the longest film  so this is not the longest script, but this script includes lots of stage directions and all the dialogue which will be used in our footage/ film, We plan on putting names on PERSON A, B and C but for the moment they are known as that.

We have made this to tell the actors exactly what to say so they are not confused about whats going on, so we seem professional and were not making what were doing on the spot.

This script is quite detailed and productive which just shows that we know what were doing and the scenes that are to come.